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Come now, and sing the song of the lullaby,
Hark, hear the music of the dead night,
Revel in the laughter that is darkness,
And turn your deepest desires into reality,
Release your century-old hatred,
And rampage on the streets of just.

Come, and bathe in the crimson blood of innocence,
Spill the rain of eternal silence,
And unchain the demon within,
Walk from your puppeted life,
To a world where strings are cut,
and laws are lost.

Come, and pledge your suffering soul to the emptiness,
and water the evil seed sowed within you,
Waiting for the black sun to shine its undead flame,
Waiting for its root to dig,
And delve unto a sorrowful heart.

Come now, and be dressed for an eternal genocide,
Pave the path for the requiem of flames,
Plague the world with deadly pestilence,
and fill it with fear for the shadows.

Come, and be embraced by the malice within,
And make the world an endless genocide.
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A poem that was inspired from one of my character's whispering thoughts. Before he became perserk and killed almost all his family

All C&C are welcomed

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:iconravenpiobaire:
Oooo! I love your imagery, dark and painful. Well written, and great choice in descriptors. Keep up the good work mate!

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:iconizumabakumatsu:
Thank you for those kind comments. Thank you for your fave as well. XD

--

In life, in death.
Inverted callings, winding me apart.
Orienting souls, devouring shells.

~~~

Living in the rain of thoughts,
closed mind ethereally


Member of: ~TYPE-MOON
:iconmormegilthefirst:
Very nice poem. I like your style =)
You can really feel the pain in it... yeah, I really like it =D
:iconravenpiobaire:
oh most welcome mate!

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Love from your Friendly Neighborhood Deviant
Raven Piobaire

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:iconizumabakumatsu:
Thank you for those kind comments. Thank you for your fave as well. XD

--

In life, in death.
Inverted callings, winding me apart.
Orienting souls, devouring shells.

~~~

Living in the rain of thoughts,
closed mind ethereally


Member of: ~TYPE-MOON
:iconardaine:
Wow, Izuma! That's so dark and rather evil! Almost sadistic in some sense! You're extremely descriptive and your words provide such strong imagery! However, knowing you, this is nothing more than a piece of art from you.

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Sorry my dear, but frankly...I'M STRICTLY APATHY! :noes:
:iconizumabakumatsu:
Oh my... Don't say such thing. You make me sound like some sadistic guy. O_O Anyway, thank you for the nice comments

--

In life, in death.
Inverted callings, winding me apart.
Orienting souls, devouring shells.

~~~

Living in the rain of thoughts,
closed mind ethereally


Member of: ~TYPE-MOON
:iconnoble-phantasm:
Oh, this is an especially nice one. I can feel the aggression behind it... almost like I'm really being compelled to go out and do violent things... >_> ^^;

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"It's strange. I know we could have a close match and try to kill each other, but I can't laugh.
"Ah, I see. I don't want to kill you.
"I just can't stand your existence."

~Ryougi Shiki

~~~

~TYPE-MOON
:iconizumabakumatsu:
hehe, thanks. It was made so that I can feel better if I lot control over my sense. :P

Thanks for the fave. Just don't go killing the boys at your dorm. :P

--

In life, in death.
Inverted callings, winding me apart.
Orienting souls, devouring shells.

~~~

Living in the rain of thoughts,
closed mind ethereally


Member of: ~TYPE-MOON

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